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pete Alchemist

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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 10:23 am Post subject: |
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| hydro wrote: | | pete wrote: | | OzMic wrote: | HEAVY !  |
Wow!  |
I am truly grateful to the both of you that I have this outlet to let go of some of my feelings. |
I love to read your poems  _________________ Great art is captured, good or bad behavior, from a man with the courage to be honest |
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hydro Alchemist

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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:08 am Post subject: |
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desires
feel me on the floor
close the door
desires make me weak
cant speak
mouth to mouth
a secret I will keep
you know what I want
the energy is in the thought
I asked for your permission
to lay next to you and give
your heart a listen
cant speak
desires make me weak _________________ "somewhere a star shines brighter"~SM |
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pete Alchemist

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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 2:56 pm Post subject: |
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| hydro wrote: | desires
feel me on the floor
close the door
desires make me weak
cant speak
mouth to mouth
a secret I will keep
you know what I want
the energy is in the thought
I asked for your permission
to lay next to you and give
your heart a listen
cant speak
desires make me weak |
Great! _________________ Great art is captured, good or bad behavior, from a man with the courage to be honest |
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FaerieB Loyal

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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 2:58 pm Post subject: |
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I like this one!  _________________ MAKE SOMETHING!!! |
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hydro Alchemist

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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 3:01 pm Post subject: |
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 _________________ "somewhere a star shines brighter"~SM |
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hydro Alchemist

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Posted: Thu Jul 08, 2010 12:50 pm Post subject: |
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My dreams have come true
thanks to you
cant thank you enough
it is tough
thousand of miles away
connected everyday
I see the signs
through mathematical rhymes
cosmic stars aligned
making the perfect match in time
 _________________ "somewhere a star shines brighter"~SM |
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pete Alchemist

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Posted: Thu Jul 08, 2010 3:56 pm Post subject: |
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| hydro wrote: | My dreams have come true
thanks to you
cant thank you enough
it is tough
thousand of miles away
connected everyday
I see the signs
through mathematical rhymes
cosmic stars aligned
making the perfect match in time
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That is heavy! _________________ Great art is captured, good or bad behavior, from a man with the courage to be honest |
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hydro Alchemist

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Posted: Thu Jul 08, 2010 6:06 pm Post subject: |
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thank you Pete!!!  _________________ "somewhere a star shines brighter"~SM |
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hydro Alchemist

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Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 4:28 pm Post subject: |
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Ying-Yang
I weap the day away in tears
for the one's who are so dear
life and death
a full circle
has come
two friends who will be there till the end
I pray that
the one
did not die in sin
he will always
be a true friend
I cry for the other
who is so far
wishing I could see him
today he was born
a shining star! _________________ "somewhere a star shines brighter"~SM |
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pete Alchemist

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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 1:51 pm Post subject: |
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| hydro wrote: | Ying-Yang
I weap the day away in tears
for the one's who are so dear
life and death
a full circle
has come
two friends who will be there till the end
I pray that
the one
did not die in sin
he will always
be a true friend
I cry for the other
who is so far
wishing I could see him
today he was born
a shining star! |
Great! _________________ Great art is captured, good or bad behavior, from a man with the courage to be honest |
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hydro Alchemist

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Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 10:34 am Post subject: |
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| pete wrote: |
Great! |
this is life,deep pain and deep love
and all the colors in between  _________________ "somewhere a star shines brighter"~SM |
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hydro Alchemist

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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 12:29 pm Post subject: |
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the last day
one month ago today
you were takin away
everyday
I cry
everyday
I ask why
thinking of memories of you
till I feel
blue
if I had another day
I would never turn you away
when I look at your smiling face
I realize
no one could ever take your
place!!
 _________________ "somewhere a star shines brighter"~SM |
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hydro Alchemist

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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:51 am Post subject: |
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it is what it is
spent many nights
looking out the window
he was
my friend
my lover
my best friends brother
he looked like Perry
and no other!
out all night
chasing the light
became a fright
when he came home
I was looking for a fight
I had to leave him to do what's right
with the passing of his brother
we have been brought back together
friends forever
I want to be there for him
but my boyfriend wants me to pretend
he is no longer my friend....:( _________________ "somewhere a star shines brighter"~SM |
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hydro Alchemist

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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:46 pm Post subject: |
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killing me
relationships
are
overrated
outdated
out of whack
full of talking smack
making me want to
attack
wishing I could
take it all back
cant control me
you don't rule me
suffocation
cant breath
took the life
right outta me _________________ "somewhere a star shines brighter"~SM |
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hydro Alchemist

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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 11:27 am Post subject: |
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Im trying to write a poem
to express how I feel
I need to figure out what is real
I feel like I have failed your test
she has beat me at my best
I have to find a way to get this off my chest
I am angry I must confess! _________________ "somewhere a star shines brighter"~SM |
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